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-LT-
09-22-2007, 05:33 PM
I like haikus
But sometimes they
Don't make sense
Refrigirator

Do you like haikus?

Fenix
09-22-2007, 05:40 PM
That's not a haiku.
Wrong number of syllables,
And too many lines.

-LT-
09-22-2007, 05:53 PM
It's a joke.

Fenix
09-22-2007, 06:09 PM
I'm not sure I get what you're sellin' here.

Lemmy
09-22-2007, 06:45 PM
Whats a hiaku? Japanese pornography?

Fenix
09-22-2007, 06:48 PM
No, that's hentai. Haiku is Japanese poetry

MarineCorp
09-22-2007, 06:49 PM
OMG!!! not its not! its hentai -_-

anyway

I like haikus (hehe)
i don't know why im laughing...
Oh wait, um, hello?..... :-\

Hunter
09-22-2007, 06:51 PM
Hentai.. lol.. Actually I've nerer read any of those haikus... If those are like the first 2, than they are not for me..

10-Neon
09-22-2007, 08:04 PM
Refrigerator
Oldest joke in the book...well...
Yes, I think it is.

--

Oh no! MarineCorp,
You're laughing out of madness!
You think I'm a duck.

MarineCorp
09-22-2007, 08:10 PM
Yes how did you know?
Wait don't tell me...is it poo?
haha this is fun :P

Fenix
09-22-2007, 08:48 PM
This is very lame.
I don't even like haikus.
Damn you all to hell!!

MarineCorp
09-22-2007, 08:54 PM
Really? are you sure?
Well, your base belongs to me
I really mean it..

Fenix
09-22-2007, 08:58 PM
What in God's good name!?
Two threads have mentioned hentai.
ZOMG WTF

(I say ZOMG like zom-GUH, so it counts.)

MarineCorp
09-22-2007, 09:03 PM
I know...tell me about it.... ;D

Scarecrow
09-22-2007, 09:21 PM
Keep the tentacles out of this forum. ;)

roderek
09-22-2007, 10:13 PM
roar in the silence
splatered blood is all over
a new mark to make

is this a haiku?

Fenix
09-22-2007, 10:15 PM
Second line needs another syllable.

MarineCorp
09-22-2007, 10:15 PM
You need 1 more syllable in the second line ^_^

like this:

5syllables
7syllables
5syllables

ssjfox
09-23-2007, 01:05 AM
Zerg chase and destroy
The terran? Nuclear launch
Bye bye you overmind

coreyb
09-23-2007, 02:07 AM
Yeah I've posted one in the writing competition :)

JBL
09-25-2007, 03:46 AM
Deleted a few
Replies cuz it was getting
Very spammy, lol

The Watcher
09-25-2007, 03:53 AM
Why hasn't anyone posted
on my new thread TGS
It makes me sad, Kinda

well then again In the description I basically said all there is to say :/

don't mind me I'm just working out my slight paranoia that I did something wrong and know whenever I post on a thread it dies and no one comments on it again, I know its messed up in my head.

missamanda
10-01-2007, 05:37 PM
haikus in english may seem a bit limited, but the form can be nice when used properly...

Patuljak
10-01-2007, 05:54 PM
I tried to write haikus
With pain, I wrote line after line;
but my mind was dry.

BnechbReaker
10-01-2007, 06:00 PM
omg omg omg omg omg
wtf wtf wtf wtf wtf wtf wtf
lol lol lol lol lol


?

10-Neon
10-07-2007, 07:36 PM
Not words, syllables.
"omg" has three, not one.
Please though, try again.

JBL
10-07-2007, 10:17 PM
if you pronomce omg like it was a word.. it would work.

ShdwyTemplar
10-07-2007, 11:31 PM
What do we know now?
Do we know the truer truth?
Nay, we know nothing.

Stories are the truth,
Albeit, unwritten truths.
What do we seek then?

Answers or riddles?
Do we even have the choice?.
That answer is truth.

Hunter
10-15-2007, 09:50 PM
Lol you all are poets:D I just watch.. Damn I can't even think of a haiku! Not even write one..:D

Z-BosoN
10-15-2007, 11:06 PM
I remember there was a nother type of Japanese poetry

I believe it started with an "S".

Does anyone know what I'm talking about?