Re: 4) Sonnet of the Dominion Ghost [Archive]

NateSMZ

10-10-2007, 06:50 PM

decent poem, the rhyme scheme was carried well

-LT-

10-11-2007, 08:18 AM

Nice rhyme!

BnechbReaker

10-11-2007, 07:30 PM

i found it quite hard to follow the rhythm, maybe it's just me

NateSMZ

10-12-2007, 06:24 PM

good concept carried thru the last line... the lines just didn't quite live up to it - but good effort

Lenga

10-12-2007, 07:17 PM

reminded me of starcraft ghost nova

Darktemplar_L

10-17-2007, 12:12 AM

A sonnet is usually about love...But I couldn't find any given meaning to this, it was about a ghost's pain... Is that all?