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NateSMZ
10-10-2007, 07:09 PM
pretty good... didn't really get passion from it - but was ok
josh
10-11-2007, 08:19 AM
Yeah I agree. Wasn't really much but it still has a good composition.
Fenix
10-11-2007, 08:21 AM
Eh, it was OK....Too cold, you know? Like you didn't care. And the third paragraph doesn't make sense.
Joneagle_X
10-11-2007, 04:18 PM
I think it makes sense. It just....

There's no emotion in the words, to me.
BnechbReaker
10-11-2007, 07:06 PM
i can't relate the poem to its title