Re: 7) Protoss Love Poem

[NateSMZ]

haha - that's actually kinda cool

[Bizarro_Paragon]

Well, this one gets my vote.

Seriously though this is awesome. Applause to the author.

[ssjfox]

It's so simple... but its so good. This will be my vote for the competion so far.

[-LT-]

Simple, but good.

[josh]

LOL. I was expecting something different. This poem could get my vote. :)

[Joneagle_X]

I like this one a lot as well.

I can't believe how much I want to vote for it. :D

[BnechbReaker]

this is very cool, a poem doesn't need many words to convey a message or a feeling, most have heard of the short iapanese haikus and nearly every single classic chinese poem is 4 lines long, but conveys a lot of meaning.

[Joneagle_X]

I don't think this really has anything to do with haikus or an asian style of poetry. Just a classic excerpt with a thoughtful twist. It's really rather creative.

[josh]

I like this one a lot as well.

I can't believe how much I want to vote for it. :D


LOL. It's really worth a vote. The poem says so many things. ;D

[josh]

Yeah, but I think if you read the "but my heart is for you" in a Zealots voice makes it un-Zealotty. ;D

[NateSMZ]

I actually like this. The writer is an intelligent person. I say that because they entered the endeavor with the intent of just throwing something together.... but it came out with memorable lines anyway

now, I could be wrong - this could be the product of hours of intense labor... but that's the feeling I get... wasn't trying that hard - just wanted to have fun... but something interesting happened anyway

and so I say to you, if you ever want to be a poet - you could prolly do it...... this won't win a noble peace prize... but then again, nothing posted here would - so well done sir

[JBL]

Nice one, I like it.

[NateSMZ]

congratulations