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josh
10-11-2007, 07:34 AM
Very highly accurate, however, the story went so fast although it's understandable. Worth a vote.
BnechbReaker
10-11-2007, 06:21 PM
yeah this is a very fast paced story, but i think it's pretty good
NateSMZ
10-17-2007, 04:10 AM
Interesting story... the plot seemed to move too quickly in parts - and by that I mean, in your head you prolly had the whole tale imagined, but we don't have access to all that info - so in parts it felt like you left things out without even realizing it
BloodHawk
10-19-2007, 10:27 AM
Poorly written.

Boring read.

Doesn't make much sense.

Sorry as I go through these I'm just being blunt with the ones I don't feel have anything of merit.
Patuljak
10-20-2007, 12:28 PM
The story itself isn't bad, but the language and structure ruins it all. Sorry, it's just not fun reading it because of that.