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NateSMZ
10-10-2007, 07:53 PM
nice lil rhyme, had a sing-song feel
BirdofPrey
10-10-2007, 07:54 PM
Hells yeah go probes
Meee
10-10-2007, 07:58 PM
*sniff* that was...beautiful *sniff*
headstock
10-11-2007, 08:11 AM
ha, i like :)

very nice
-LT-
10-11-2007, 08:15 AM
Great poem. It should be called ''The Probe'' or something.

Never trapped by its own creations
Unlike the workers of the confederation

This is so true. :good:
kuvasz
10-11-2007, 06:47 PM
Such simple topic presented in a great style, I like it!
BnechbReaker
10-11-2007, 07:04 PM
this is such a cute poem, definitely worth a vote
NateSMZ
10-12-2007, 06:32 PM
I'll repeat that I expect to hear children chanting this in the near future... it was pretty well crafted - good job... just not my cup of tea