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BnechbReaker
10-11-2007, 06:59 PM
good effort, but not as good as some of the others imo
NateSMZ
10-17-2007, 04:25 AM
well written... I thought the quality of writing was actually better than most others I've read... just wasn't too interesting to me, is all - different strokes an all that - but good job
BloodHawk
10-19-2007, 10:18 AM
More so goofy and awkward than humorous.

I like how you chose to write about the life of an average Terran, but that's about all I liked.
Patuljak
10-20-2007, 12:46 PM
Yeah, it's goofy, but I think it's a good story. I had fun reading it and the theme is very cool, but it's not enough to get a vote. Good effort though!
EatMeReturns
10-23-2007, 10:36 PM
it was for another competition where i had to use the given first sentence and last sentence, and that's what i came up with.