-=[Zealot Picture!]=-

[coreyb]

Here is my zealot picture that took me three day's to do! , I only traced the outline so It kinda guided my limit's of the zealot itself! , please tell me what You think because I love it and so should You all! (I think!) , please leave comment's and vote and also some feedback would be lovley so I can try on differnt thing's and focus a bit more on thing's that ain't right and/or thing's that just don't mix! , thankyou all! and enjoy! :)

Zealot picture by coreyb:

http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff112/CoreyBrock/Myprotosszealotbycoreyb.jpg

And yet again , thankyou all for viewing! :)

[josh]

Although the shading is average, I love the psi blade look. I'll give you a good rating. :)

[coreyb]

Thank's for the freeback Josh! , You are alway's a good friend! :D

[BirdofPrey]

I am having a feeling of deja vu. I seem to remember a thread exacly like this and my comment was it looked good and the only improvement would be the addition of color

[coreyb]

I am having a feeling of deja vu. I seem to remember a thread exacly like this and my comment was it looked good and the only improvement would be the addition of color
And I guess this need's colour? , nah i ain't a colour person! :) but still ! , all feedback is good!

[BnechbReaker]

nice work coreyb, was it originally this faint? or is it the scanner

[coreyb]

It's the scanner , it's quite old , the pic in real life is ALOT better , I can tell You right now people! :)

[darkone]

that sucks, stupid scanner

[coreyb]

WHA??? , picture or scanner????

[darkone]

the scanner man it sucks, its a good picture

[coreyb]

Thank's everyone!

[BnechbReaker]

oh, so it's the scanner, the scanner is really bad then

[coreyb]

Yeah sorry guy's! , doesn't mean it ain't good tho! :P

[SD-Count]

You need to work on proportions and lighting when you shade. Also, the cross hatching needs a lot of work as right now there is no real distinctions between light->light gray->gray->dark gray->black->super black. You seem to have three shades and are all very coarse. Use more straight lines for a finished look, this looks a bit traced right now. Straight edges are your best friend in everything, even organic things. Do something with the background, white is never an option, even if there's no visible lighting, make one up lightly so there is some contrast in the background.

Finally, PS it and add color, don't color a sketch, if you want to do color start knowing you'll do color and don't cross hatch and all that.

[coreyb]

Wow that is some good info there man , thank's!!! :)

[BirdofPrey]

Hey now i remember this. You made a thread about it before but the picture was from a camera shot of the drawing.

Didn't I suggest a scanner but you said it didn't work?

[coreyb]

Hey now i remember this. You made a thread about it before but the picture was from a camera shot of the drawing.

Didn't I suggest a scanner but you said it didn't work?
Yep! , but I fixed it! :D

[JBL]

Fixed the poll options, "Not Bad" should be better than "Mediocre"

[coreyb]

Fixed the poll options, "Not Bad" should be better than "Mediocre"
Ok thank's! , I thought medicore in the middle because medi and medium , so it's in the middle! :P , sorry :)

[Ursawarrior]

only voted good because of the bad hand writing LOL! just kidding..... nice pic

[MarineCorp]

I say a low 4/5 however you must have done a hard work! great work and you could have done better :D

[Z-BosoN]

It's good, did you draw that out of your mind or did you copy it off the interenet? Either way, it's real good. I wouldn't be able to do better anyways :)

Make sure the last rating is 0/5, because 0/0 is undefined :P

[coreyb]

Umm why the hell did You vote why did I bother trying?!

[kuvasz]

I wouldn't be able to do anything similar and it does look like a bit of a work but why did you say you only traced the outlines?
http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff112/CoreyBrock/Myprotosszealotbycoreyb.jpg
http://eu.starcraft2.com/art.xml?s=45

[coreyb]

Yeah I traced the outlines , and It took me 3 days and no homework no nothing , exept everyday things and drawing that! , and there is alot of differnces , minors ones but Your all jelous because Your saying its bad and saying waste of time because You couldnt do anything like that! :D

[Chax424]

Nice job!
The line art is great, I'd just make the lights and darks more pronounced. How are you with pen and ink?
The gray scale look male also be the result of a mediocre scan. Scanners can ruin even the best art.