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Roleplay - Redworld

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Arbiter Thessir, Aug 23, 2010.

Roleplay - Redworld

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Arbiter Thessir, Aug 23, 2010.

  1. IUMA

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    Torin and his forces were standing on the elevated platform as they witnessed how the Terran forces were approaching their position. Calmly and in formation, wich intrigued the young commander.
    Just out of range, they halted and seemed to wait.

    Enzal and the Dark Templars had returned swiftly and were now waiting to the right of their position. Outside of the detection range of the Raven. Patiently waiting but eager to strike when ordered to.
    Then the message was broadcast.

    A shock went through Torin and his protoss forces. The arrogance of this Terran was a smack in the face of their respected culture. It infuriated Torin as he was close to unleash a full charge upon them. But his common sense halted his plan as this provocation would end badly on their behalve. For now they held the high ground and so the advantage.
    Torin calmed himself down and concentrated. Before answering the rude Terran who didn't even had the decency of introducing himself.

    "I am Torin, of the Zhakul Guardians. And your words are hollow Terran. You claim to come in peace and yet you march on our position in battle formation. But what's worst is that you insult us by abusing the name of the great Tassadar. A greeting that you have no right to utter. For this monstrocity alone I should end your pitifull life Terran.
    ... Yet I will allow you to speak for now. Choose your next words carefully, or you will suffer the wrath of the protoss."
     
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    "I deeply apologize for my useing of that phrase. I wasn't thinking strait. I see that you have a sizable force there, brave one. I will leave you be for now. But I will not hesitate to fight you on the field of battle. Good bye for now."Kyle replied. He than moved his forces away until the protoss were out of sight."That failed. I have such a big mouth. Troops, move into the forest."He ordered



    (Also, do you even know what 'En Taro' means?)
     
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    Marx new Carl was right about needing scouts and was glad he had chosen to join Marx. "I already have a hive hatchery hidden in the forest, i will have them construct the means to create mutalisks and hatch any drones I may need. I can only control 5 drones so it should not be that hard hopefully we will be able to, wait! The terrans return from there meeting with the Protoss hurry and burrow yourselves!" And with that Marx burrowed his zerglings and ultralisk and had his infested hide in the dropship. He sent the message to his hatchery to make 5 mutalisks and remake the drones he used. Then Marx burrowed into the ground himself.
     
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    Marx thought to himself while burrowed and wondered, did Carl actually mean to join him or would he return to kerrigan and leave him to her wrath? This was slot to consider but apperntly Marx had time as he could feel the terrans walk by.


    ((OOC hey guys just want to say today is my bday and sorry that this is such a short post. ;) ))
     
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    Torin frowned his eyebrow above his blue light emitting eyes as the Terran force simply apologized, turned around and left. Surely this strange species their weak minds changed more often then a leaf in a psionic storm. He and his brethren felt insulted even more by the shallow actions displayed before them. Still they were not the only hostile force on this planet. Their numbers were to few to utterly purge this planet of these scavengers.

    Torin positioned 3 Zealots and 2 Stalker at the top of the ramp. And send the other 2 Zealots and Stalkers to guard the other ramp that leaded up on their position. The observers were sent out ahead as sentries. Giving them advanced warning when other forces would approach them again.

    The Dark Templars went back to their mission of scouting the area and started to carefully follow the retreating forces. Stalking their moves from the shadows of this rock ridden wasteland.
    Another Dark Templar spotted a Terran encampment and was prowling on their position. From a distance he could spot a Siege Tank deployed, marines, crates and a Terran construction that looked like a tower. It was a different force then those that confronted them. Are they together or two separate factions? The Dark Templar closed in cautiously to find out.

    Torin on the other hand, was occupied with different matters. This encounter had left him puzzled and confused. The Terrans were a strange race, but disturbing and dangerous if allowed to rampant freely. His thoughts went back to the new protoss force heading in their direction. Only together they would stand a change. But this tribe was unknown to them, so contact was not that easy.
    With the help of the High Templar Zorya, Torin started to concentrate and channel his psionic capability to reach out to this fleet. His mind left his body and started to wander through the sky up into the atmosphere. Homing in on the familiar signature of protoss energy as he soon found himself in connection with the new arrivals. The number of ships was cloaked by the Arbiter's shield. So Torin focused his message on that ship.

    "En Taro Tassadar, to you speaks Torin. Commander of the Zhakul Guardians. I have been sent her by the Keepers on an important task. I believe we seek the same you and I.
    But unfortunately, we are not alone. Both Terran and Zerg are here, some of the Terran's we already had an encounter with. It would be beneficial for both of us to join forces against this pest. And prevent them from learning this place's secrets so that I can not be used against our kind. What say you?"


    ((OOC: of course i know what "En Taro... means. All the more reasons why unknown Terrans shouldn't utter that phrase.

    And happy birthday Matt))
     
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    Kyle sees a Terran encampment in the corner of his left eye. He stops his troops and turns toward the Terrans. A siege tank is in the middle.,with some marines guarding it. He sees a dominion flag. "Dang it! Dominion. Raven, scan the encampment and see if you can find anything besides the siege tank and marines."Kyle says."Order acknowledged." The raven responds. The raven then turns horizontal and hovers in one place.
    ((OCC I meant in real-life.))
     
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    Oh man this this die?
     
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    I hope not
     
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    What happened? It was a decent read.
     
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    Someone post an action to keep this alive. I want more RP's so I can use a DT I thought of.
     
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    I can't, I need to wait for reply before I can continue.

    if this dies i'm thinking of starting my own campaign.
     
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    ZzzZzzz.

    *Static* MEEPMEEPMEEP!

    Carl suddenly wakes up to hear Mickey notify him of something.

    Alright, send me what you see.

    Suddenly, the darkness in the tunnel he burrowed fades away, and he sees through Mickey's eyes. He can even take manual control, if he pleases.
    Carl looks on to find something he did not expect. Clyde recorded the whole thing, and Carl's highly developed mind can perceive both views at once. The two scouts saw a Terran strike force approaching a Protoss defensive position, guns ready. Then, without a shot being fired, the Terrans turned around and left, but the Protoss kept their guard.
    The Terrans then fled into the forest, towards a terran encampment that Mickey can just barely see over the trees.

    Darn it, they have a base here!

    Carl wills Clyde to start listening to radio waves. Although not perfect, Clyde has some capability of understanding radio wave patterns. He can sense an increase in them when someone is talking, and send them to Carl, who can try to make sense of what is going on based on the pitch and tone. It's not very accurate, but it's good to know when commanders are giving orders, so that Carl knows when to strike.

    Alright, everyone, get over here. We'll have Robert dig a tunnel for us, and move in to strike the Terrans from behind. If I can get his help, maybe we can coordinate a strike with Marx.

    "Marx, can I talk to you for a second?"
     
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    (hey you guys, I've been reading the RP, and if Its okay, can I join? I'll do my best to fit in. Even if I think the Slots are full. If I'm sent away, Its fine.)

    Name: Khar'Thul (Slash in Terran. :p )
    Gender: Male
    Race: Protoss
    Age: 250 years.
    Base unit: Infested Immortal. (Check Avvie for reference. XP)

    Appearance:
    He may look like a regular Immortal, but he has something else no Protoss would ever have, Zerg infestation markings. One of his legs turned to a spined, much like a lurker leg. He has two spikes with a bit of creep on his shoulder Psi Disrupter Cannons. Another of his legs seems to have an egg full of the acids banelings, but this is still unknown if it is really a baneling bomb or just a Zerg look. (Its just for the look. XP). Finally, there is something much like a spine coming out from the back of his armor.

    Personality:
    Despite having Zerg-like appearances, Khar'Thul is still, loyal to the will of the Khala, despite his exile. He, along with a few of his robotic and mechanical bretheren, has flown across the different sectors, meeting all sorts of races. His fighting spirit is as strong as he was a Zealot. He never flees, he would go do daring things, including battling large masses of Siege tanks or even, if he is bombarded with large masses of Baneling bombs. Added to that, He is a bit concern for the bretheren he has left for those are the only protoss he has who is still loyal to him. He is also.. a bit.. err, too brave, He gets into situations, risking lives mostly, for himself or for the few who risk their own lives for Khar'Thul. He also despises Terrans.. A lot.

    Biography:
    Born as a part of the Highborne Conclave in Auir, he was one of the greatest fighters of the Ara Tribe. At the invasion of the Zerg, He felt he had the urge to help Tassadar in his missions to rid of the Overmind, going with him across the stars, Eventually Falling when they return back to Auir, Helping Tassadar free from the Conclave he once served. Unfortunately he fell in battle, helping Tassadar escape in the process. Returned as a Dragoon during the assult of the Overmind until the Brood Wars. During that period, His body was transferred from the dragoon shell to his new Immortal shell, serving Selendis for a while, Until such time he got lost in a mission in char, eventually getting infested with the Zerg in the process. Amazingly, he managed to escape with the help of a brood against Kerrigan. However he was not accepted warmly when he returned to Shakuras. Eventually he was exiled, along with the robotics and the Mechanical Allies, Forcing him to travel the stars, In search for a permanent place to call 'home'.

    Forces Commanded: Aside from his small citadel which he keeps for Mechanical/Robotic Repairs, this is his usual escorts:

    4x Stalkers
    2x Immortals
    1x Sentry
    1x Reaver
    1x Collossus
    2x Observers
    1x Void Ray
    5x Phase prisms
    (tell me if this is too much. I'll make first post if I'm accepted.)
     
  14. TheDoctor1911

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    Ehm, I don't think Protoss can be infested.
     
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    Can we have multiple characters?
     
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    Well its just the exoskeleton with Zerg Stuff attached on it, It looks infested, (at least the mind and the real body of Khar'Thul isn't.) But the armor is a bit, so yea.
     
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    Well that's for Arbiter Thessir to decide, the creator of this thread and rpg. But his absence worries me.
     
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    That shouldn't be a problem then.
    It seems that Arbiter is gone though. Maybe you can join in for now if it's okay with the others. No need to let this die just because Arbiter is gone.
     
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    Well then how are we gonna deal with the entire phased disturbance disk plot without arbiter?
    There's is probably a good reason why he hasn't posted in a while, maybe real life trouble caught up with him. We should be patient for a bit more before deciding to go on without him
     
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    Marx was awakened from his nap when Carl called for him. "Ya what is it Carl?" Marx said as he exited from his burrowed tunnel. " I relly hope this is good news from your scout?"

    ((OOC hey guys I've been off for a while cause I've had somethings happening in my life but just so you all know I don't intend to leave this rp till it's all over and I like the idea of another player.))